Paper Evaluation

My McCandless Response essay was one of my more clear and well thought out papers, yet I would have to evaluate it as it currently as a middle level paper. While my argument is good, I feel like its not much of a point to make. Furthermore, while my paper is clear and easy to read, I am lacking in strength of support for my stance and challenge for the opposing argument. By more thoroughly developing my thesis and more accurately using my insights and arguments to support that thesis, I could give this paper the solidifying polish it needs.