Friday, March 12, 2010
Paper Evaluation
My McCandless Response essay was one of my more clear and well thought out papers, yet I would have to evaluate it as it currently as a middle level paper. While my argument is good, I feel like its not much of a point to make. Furthermore, while my paper is clear and easy to read, I am lacking in strength of support for my stance and challenge for the opposing argument. By more thoroughly developing my thesis and more accurately using my insights and arguments to support that thesis, I could give this paper the solidifying polish it needs.
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I wrote this comment hours ago but I guess it never went through..? I don't know if my comment showed up or not but ill just write it again! I also edited my McCandless response essay and I saw that my point of view wasn't too strong and wasn't sure if was clear enough. Clear evidence and naysayers can improve your argument and just making sure that what you say isn't twisted to make your point of view seem more just. Just going through and finding your thesis and main points to argue your case in your story will help you alot! Just keep your thesis strong and your own and I'm sure your paper will be great!
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